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Mar. 25th, 2009 09:07 pm
sabinelagrande: (sga - this is john's buggy face)
[personal profile] sabinelagrande
Title: Thirty Minutes
Summary: A lot can happen in thirty minutes.
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Word Count: 700
Rating/Warnings: NC-17, rough sex, gratuitous fucking profanity, light blasphemy
Pairing: John/Rodney
A/N: So here's what happened: I have grown weary of the many plotty and talky things I am writing; I wanted to write some porn; I had thirty minutes. Ergo, thirty minutes of porn, and a total lack of a creative title. I did, admittedly, go back in and spruce it up a little, which doesn't actually count because m'colleague came in at like the 27 minute mark and I had to stop writing.



A lot can happen in thirty minutes.

For example, it's enough time for Rodney to finally break John.

It's enough time for John to end the fight that they've been having for the last six weeks. Enough time for John to slap the lube they keep stealing from the infirmary- which is sort of blue and smells really strange and, Rodney thinks, is meant for sonograms, and who the fuck here needs a sonogram except for Teyla anyway?- into Rodney's hand and snarl, "Fine, I'll fucking do it, for fuck's sake, if it'll shut you the fuck up."

It's enough time for Rodney's eyes to get wide, because he's actually, finally won; not enough for him to waste on being triumphant, though, because John looks pissed.

Fuck, this is going to be so good.

Because, when they're together, John is careful and polite and always, always one step removed from everything he does, like anything the least bit dangerous or uncertain will just ruin what they have. Half the time he won't even let Rodney bottom- Rodney thinks this is because John's afraid he's going to hurt him, cause it's not like Rodney's a grown-ass man or thirty pounds heavier or anything. Maybe it's not, though- maybe Rodney's got it all wrong and John's just a greedy son of a bitch- but what Rodney really wants is to get fucked so hard his brain shuts down. He wants to see John in it, for once, and he's going to make the time and space for that to happen if he has to create a fucking time dilation field in the middle of the mess hall.

Back in the non-relativistic world, there's still plenty of time for Rodney to slick up his own fingers- he doesn't really use enough of the lube, but he doesn't care. Honestly? He's looking forward to how it's going to hurt when John stretches him open- it's going to fucking burn, he's going to sit funny for a day and a half- and he's fucking aching for it to happen.

John's apparently thinking about time management himself, because he pushes Rodney off the bed and onto his knees, the tube clattering to the floor somewhere out of sight, probably where one of them will probably step on it in the middle of the night. He doesn't even bother to make a show out of opening his pants and pushing down his boxers, his cock already hard; Rodney does take a little minute to be triumphant then, because he fucking knew it, he knew John would get off on this if he'd just calm the fuck down for one second and let it happen.

"No hands," John says, in a hoarse, commanding voice that he's never used in bed before, the kind of tone that goes straight to Rodney's dick. "Get ready for me."

John's got time to grab the back of Rodney's head and just yank him onto his dick. Rodney opens up wide for it; it stretches the corners of his mouth in a way that he just knows he'll still be feeling tomorrow, that'll make him brush his fingers against his lips when nobody's watching and just shiver. John doesn't even let him stop to breathe; he sucks air in through his nose, raspy breaths that sound obscene and harsh in the quiet of the room.

With ten minutes to go, Rodney's riding his own fingers and just swallowing John like he's manna; he feels like a complete and utter whore- John's whore- and his cock's so hard he could probably inflict blunt force trauma with it.

John pulls him off way before Rodney's satisfied, panting and looking gloriously feral. He doesn't even talk, just points at the bed. Rodney scrambles up, graceless and awkward, and braces himself, his head down and his legs spread wide.

There's just enough time left over for John to hold him down and slam all the way into Rodney's ass. It's enough time for John to hiss, "Don't you fucking dare come until I tell you to," and enough time for Rodney to moan out loud at the very thought.

But that's about it.
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Date: 2009-03-26 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com
BUNK. BUNKBUNKBUNKBUNK.

I'm over here in my bunk.

Wow.

Date: 2009-03-26 03:57 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - i've got it)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
This comment made me giggle out loud.

Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-26 03:38 am (UTC)
ext_1911: (john & rodney grip)
From: [identity profile] telesilla.livejournal.com
Um...well...yes...*flails*

Okay that was hot like a burning hot thing!

Date: 2009-03-26 03:57 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - thrilling heroics)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
::grins:: Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-26 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravensilverwing.livejournal.com
Apparently I'm combustable. Who'd have thought...

Nice.

Date: 2009-03-26 04:19 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - collar plz)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thanks!

Date: 2009-03-26 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seekergeek.livejournal.com
*shivers and falls over moaning*
*crawls to bunk*

Date: 2009-03-26 04:19 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - rodney tested)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
My work here is done!

(For a minute, there, you were "Amanda" again- but it seems to have cleared up. It was worrisome.)

Date: 2009-03-26 04:24 am (UTC)
ext_2160: SGA John & Rodney (Porn!)
From: [identity profile] winter-elf.livejournal.com
Whoo baby! Smoking hot :)

Date: 2009-03-26 04:29 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - omg)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-26 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sienata.livejournal.com
oh my gosh that was f'n awesome! so hot!!! i love it when they get wild and rough.

and i totally sympathize with you wanting to write some PWP. i want to as well, and i f'n can't. everything turns into freakin' war and peace adn it's so damn frustrating. maybe i should set a timer or something. grrr

thanks for the titilation! :) s.

Date: 2009-03-26 04:52 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (screw canon!)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you!

Man, lately it seems like every time I write the characters want to have Feelings and Emotion and Witty Banter. After this exercise, I can say I wholeheartedly recommend timer porn.

Date: 2009-03-26 04:52 am (UTC)
shalom: (Default)
From: [personal profile] shalom
light blasphemy

*cracks up*

Let me pull myself together after laughing my butt off over that alone to congratulate you some lovely, rough, fun p0rn.

Manna, that was good. *still laughing like a lunatic*

Date: 2009-03-26 05:02 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (jcs - use the force)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
I pride myself on finding new and exciting ways to blaspheme. It's a hobby of mine. Considering I was raised a Southern Baptist, I have a lot of material to work with.

I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2009-03-26 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] becs8.livejournal.com
*guh*...wow ......okay I'm back. :o)

Date: 2009-03-26 05:07 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Heh, glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2009-03-26 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scififreak.livejournal.com
Damn I wish this fic had another 300 words at the end! Whoo! lol

Date: 2009-03-26 06:18 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Heh, glad you enjoyed it!

(Wow, did I just leave the same comment twice? Sleepy Sabine is sleepy.)
Edited Date: 2009-03-26 06:19 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-26 06:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] electriclady88.livejournal.com
So I'm completely sex-stupid now. Boyfriend is looking at me funny. This fic... guh.

Date: 2009-03-27 05:12 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - collar plz)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-26 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] badwolf36.livejournal.com
Damn. Somehow this really, really works. :D Hotness is hot. Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2009-03-27 05:12 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (screw canon!)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you for reading!

Date: 2009-03-26 06:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patk.livejournal.com
*Uhm...*

Gimme a moment ...

*sweats*

*gulps*

Okay.

That? YES!

Is there more from where this came from? *g* There's nothing as hot as John on the verge of losing self control.

Also, this: "...if he has to create a fucking time dilation field in the middle of the mess hall." Brilliant line! :-)




Date: 2009-03-27 05:43 am (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - collar plz)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Unfortunately, there isn't any more of this bit- it just sort of sprung fully formed out of my brain, without anything to go with.

Glad you liked it!

Date: 2009-03-26 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luna-61.livejournal.com
Yum.
LMAO ok this line "Fine, I'll fucking do it, for fuck's sake, if it'll shut you the fuck up." has me wondering what/how Rodney was pestering John. Oh god I can hear Rodney whinning--

"Come on John, why do you get to bottom all the time I wanna bottom too. It's just not fair. Hello can you say "prostate" mine is not happy! It has been neglected, making me cranky and mean. So take care of me now!"

Sorry just got caught up in that pre-sex scene. You be a very bad good influence on me.
::goes back to read again:: *BG*

Thank you. : )

Date: 2009-03-27 05:52 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - this is rodney's srs face)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
I imagine there was a lot of "Christ's sake, Sheppard, what are you, Navy?" in there as well, which was more effective than Shep will ever admit.

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-03-26 08:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanarts-series.livejournal.com
gaaaaaaaaaaaaa warning my brain explode.....
It's so fucking good, i enjoy a lot htis sort of fic, thanks to share.

Date: 2009-03-27 05:51 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - wraith is fuckin' metal)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-26 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] takemychance.livejournal.com
Ohmygod, that was ridiculously hot.

Date: 2009-03-27 05:53 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - proud lizzy)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2009-03-27 05:54 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - rodney tested)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
I'll take that as a yes!

Date: 2009-03-26 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] antares04a.livejournal.com
Back in the non-relativistic world *lol* Perfect thoughts for Rodney!
And the story is very hot and raw and sounds absolutely like them!

Date: 2009-03-27 06:00 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - beckett confuses ford)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you, dear!

Date: 2009-03-26 07:40 pm (UTC)
ariadne83: cropped from official schematics (thing of beauty)
From: [personal profile] ariadne83
This is the best thing ever. Careful!John, pushed to the edge, and greedy!Rodney. Fantastic.

Date: 2009-03-27 06:04 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - flyboy space pimp)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2009-03-26 09:00 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-27 06:14 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (screw canon!)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thanks! :D

Date: 2009-03-26 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] almostnever.livejournal.com
*inarticulate noises of um, yeah*

Date: 2009-03-27 06:18 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - gay for kolya)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you! Glad to make you inarticulate. :)

Date: 2009-03-26 11:30 pm (UTC)
goddess47: Emu! (Default)
From: [personal profile] goddess47
Oh. Um. Whoa..... ::thud::

I like when John loses control also.....

Date: 2009-03-27 08:24 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - the new motto)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you!

Date: 2009-03-26 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] autumn2525.livejournal.com
UUUUNNNNHHHHH.......... There's just enough time left over for John to hold him down and slam all the way into Rodney's ass. It's enough time for John to hiss, "Don't you fucking dare come until I tell you to," and enough time for Rodney to moan out loud at the very thought.

I nearly fell off the couch....

Date: 2009-03-27 08:26 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - flyboy space pimp)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Please keep all arms and legs on the furniture until the fanfic comes to a complete stop.

Glad you liked it!

Date: 2009-03-27 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com
Nnnngghhhhh

Date: 2009-03-27 08:28 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - collar plz)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Heh, glad you liked!

Date: 2009-03-27 12:27 am (UTC)
ext_3761: (Default)
From: [identity profile] klatubarada.livejournal.com
*writes prescription*

'must write thirty mins of scorchio ,rip roaring sexin' porn per week til weariness is no more '

aaaaand bookmarked/favourite-ed \o/

...same time next week ?!!

Date: 2009-03-27 09:12 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - the new motto)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Now there's a prescription I might actually be able to stick to.

Date: 2009-03-27 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silverraven.livejournal.com
...oh my...HOT

*fans self*

Date: 2009-03-27 08:28 pm (UTC)
sabinetzin: (sga - memento)
From: [personal profile] sabinetzin
Thank you!
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